Clans Revamp

[Madara]

The clans listed in a revamp and these are my suggestions.

Akamichi

Red pepper pill
+10% critical damage
+ 10% Chakra boost
+10% Dodge
- 4k hp drain/ second
(Around lvl 30)

Butterfly (Without the pill)
+20% criticla damage
+20% Chakra boost
+10% dodge
-Lastes 1 min
(Around lvl 60)

Kaguya
Stacked dmg effect
-Instead of AoEs when Kaguya's attack it'll be stacked up damage

Example
Madara says : Karamatsu No Mai !
(they get hit twice) (like two punches) (1 move)
Itachi has been hit by Karamatsu No Mai for 1111 !
Itachi has been hit by Karamatsu No Mai for 1353 !

-Depending on how powerful the move is will determine how much stacked up damage there will be
-from a range from x.5-2
-Stacked dmg of up to a max of 5

Another Example
Madara
Tai: 1000

Madara says: Karamatsu No Mai !
Itachi has been hit by Karamatsu No Mai for 1000 !
Itachi has been hit by Karamatsu No Mai for 2000 !
Itachi has been hit by Karamatsu No Mai for 500 !
Or it could say
Itachi has been hit by Karamatsu No Mai for a stacked dmg of 3500 !

Damange will be completely random from x.5 to x2

Nara

Shadow Summoning
-When you hit this its a 1 tile shadow that moves in a staright line at dekai speed

Shadow Sewing no 2
-When using this the shadow will turn solid
-Making the shadow block weapons and jutsu

Shadow Release
-You attack yourself to break out of a freeze
-low hp drain

Yamanaka
-Should be able to control a boss without them breaking out
(Its not like you can use mindtransfer in a fight -.-)

[Indigo]

on akimichi that 4k hp per second is quite crazy xD

i kinda like of idea of kaguya

i dont like your nara idea, nara shadow is good at it is now
and for shadow release i think button pressing sequel would be good, people caught in shadow would need press button into direction icon would show, with 1 wrong he needs start it again, and amount of buttons to be pressed depends on naras chakra amount (like 1 button per 1000 chakra)


for yamanaka i have few improvement ideas:

Shintenshin no Jutsu - when this is used screen changes into invisible projectile, if it misses user is frozen for 5-10 seconds
maybe at uses, stats, level or rank this would become controllable (like invisible kirin users screen is on)

Shinten Bunshin no Jutsu - this is like normal shintenshin (controllable) but this can hit 2 targets (first with arrow keys other with w,a,s,d

Shinranshin no Jutsu - this will be like shintenshin but this if this hits user isnt frozen, user moves himself with arrows and can move enemy with w,a,s,d but this has like 500 chakra drain every second

Shinten Kugutsu Juin no Jutsu - makes kawarimi like thing, when its hit it changes control of user changes into opponents body

and when in control all damage that comes to controllable comes into user (except shinranshin) but user could use attack freely on ones he controls (so he can attack other people with body he controls)

[Shizuru]

It would be better if there was a release verb for Mind Transfer jutsus to, just because you might accidently reclick and release not wanting 2

[Indigo]

how can that happen, with shadow yes, but with mind transfer too? why click it so many times since your basicly frozen after using it unless you hit

[Shizuru]

sometimes it switches from having to pressit 3 times and having to press it twice, maybe its just me but anyways because if its macrod you might let go

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